Friday, December 09, 2005

The odd one out...


leaves are green, the silence seen,
the odd duck stood out as the dean,
not in mean, but in rein,
the odd duck stood out chewing the gean.

'jump'n go, duck'n go',
'wht'ya guyz'r waiting for?'
thus he spake, the voice soft,
echoes waving very oft.

ducklings jumped, slowly went,
shuffling round, blending the sound,
leaves are hosed, the silence paused,
the 'odd guy' stood in, foto-ing the cause.
-- mahesh

7 comments:

Amal said...

Vow! Very nice writeup.
I want to write like this one day in my blog... :D

Mahesh said...

thx da..:-)

~ sAn ~ said...

so cute! :)

Mahesh said...

cute - picture-o poem-o?? ethaanelum thanks...:-)

Anonymous said...

I can imagine the commotion now. I like the frame here even though I'm not a big fan of the fade out borders.

Mahesh said...

hi alicia.. i dnt have a faded borders here.. its just a thick black strip i gave as the border..:-)
i think the whole blurred background gives a feel of blurred border..

aydiv said...

Very cute